Radio advert idea

Most of the research that I conducted on radio adverts, taught me that most are short, memorable and include some sort of deal or offer from the product. Therefore, I took this into consideration when thinking of my idea for my radio advert.

*Sound of mobile phone ringing* -2 seconds

Girl1: I'm having a nightmare! I have nothing to wear tomorrow night - 3 seconds

Girl2: Why don't you order something from Morale? Their clothing is great and next day delivery is free! - 4 seconds

*Music from my previous adverts comes in* - 2 seconds

Narrator: Morale... Free next day delivery. Clothing to suit every occasion - 3 seconds